Really nice work Alex! It's hard to believe those are you first pens :icon_thum
The only feedback I can offer is with the photography. I have been struggling recently with taking pictures of my pens. I asked a friend of mine that is into photography to help me out. He suggested a couple of things:
1. use a light background so it doesn't dominate the picture
2. use lots of lights so there are no shadows around the pen
3. use a stand to hold the pen so the clip shows nicely
4. use a tripod and open the aperture so the whole pen is in focus
So far, I've been able to get much better pictures but I'm still working on it. I hope this info helps you out too! Great pens though, keep up the good work :biggrin9gp: